RE: Busy.org: The most advance steem based platform for socializing (Part 2)
Hello, @abasifreke!
Thank you for this contribution. I certainly agree with you that it is a blessing to have so many different alternatives when it comes to accessing the Steem blockchain, and busy.org is undoubtedly my favourite front-end. The platform is beautiful and offers unique features; the busy.org team are doing a wonderful job.
Your post is informative and comprehensive, and contains useful general information about the platform. You also took the time to share a few words about your personal views and preferences, however I wanted to see more editorial content in your review. Furthermore, I wanted to read a bit more about the project itself, as well as the features mentioned in your post.
That said, the writing of this post was not good enough, I'm afraid. There were issues of grammar and style. I would be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.
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I’m so sorry about that, I’ll do well to improve in my next article. Thanks for the review.
It’ll be good to see the parts that were poorly written so that I can correct myself in forthcoming articles.
Hello!
Let's start with the title:
It should read: "The most advanced steem-based platform"
Actually, this sentence should read: "There are features that I'd love to discuss in today's article"
"I will love to do something" actually expresses the idea that you are performing something in the future.
I really hope you will find this comment useful.
See you around.
Honestly I’m just seeing this right now and I so much appreciate your effort in taking time to point out my mistakes. Sorry I’m not at my best right now, but I believe with time I’ll be able to do more that what I have done so far. Thanks all the same
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!