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RE: Busy.org: The most advance steem based platform for socializing (Part 2)
I’m so sorry about that, I’ll do well to improve in my next article. Thanks for the review.
It’ll be good to see the parts that were poorly written so that I can correct myself in forthcoming articles.
Hello!
Let's start with the title:
It should read: "The most advanced steem-based platform"
Actually, this sentence should read: "There are features that I'd love to discuss in today's article"
"I will love to do something" actually expresses the idea that you are performing something in the future.
I really hope you will find this comment useful.
See you around.
Honestly I’m just seeing this right now and I so much appreciate your effort in taking time to point out my mistakes. Sorry I’m not at my best right now, but I believe with time I’ll be able to do more that what I have done so far. Thanks all the same