I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • Titles show what your post is about, so use them wisely. When defining titles, choosing and positioning words is essential to gain the user's attention. Giving general words priority than the rest is the key to achieve that. I advise you to put "Phaser 3" ahead of the title.

  • I advise you to consider using paragraphs. Separating each sentence with a blank line makes it harder to read and understand.

• Language

  • Some of your sentences are artificial. This makes them hard to read and understand. To overcome that, I advise you to check the structure of your sentences. For example, using "we" for each sentence in the post makes it boring to read. Here is an example sentence:

    • "Using the setVelocityY() function, we can move up or down on dynamic objects."

    • "By using the setVelocityY() function, it is possible to move dynamic objects on the Y-axis (up-down)."

    Instead of the one above, you can use the below one. It's not perfect nor mirror what you wrote, but it should be enough to make what I'm saying understood easily.

  • There are some sentences which are hard to understand because of the vocabulary and grammar. I advise you to proofread your posts before posting. It can increase the efficiency of your post.

• Content

  • In "requirements" section, I advise you to remove "atom" and write "any text editor (I will use atom in these tutorials)". Letting the user choose what to use is always better.

  • I advise you to set every general variable as a constant. As an example, you used 150 for speed. Instead of using 150, set it as "speed" in the settings section and do your calculations over that. For example, you can make it negative by -speed or speed * -1 depending on your taste. Same also applies to sprite dimensions.

  • You might consider changing topics to preserve some uniqueness. Similar content can be easily found on the internet. Being unique with tutorials on Utopian is not required, but preferable as we value rare posts more than others.

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