I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • I appreciate your improvement in the structure of the post. It looks better in my opinion. Thanks!

• Language

  • I personally think the usage of the first person reduces the efficiency of the post. I advise you to consider using less first person. Still, this is a personal thought, don't get me wrong! :)

  • There are some sentences which are hard to understand because of the vocabulary and grammar. I advise you to proofread your posts before posting. It can increase the efficiency of your post.

• Content

  • As I stated in my latest review, the content in your post is relatively simple. I personally appreciate tutorials which address complex matters more. Nonetheless, it is useful for beginners and I still appreciate it! :)

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