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RE: Create BOT terminal with Jquery#1 : Preparation, Input and Output , teach commands

in #utopian-io6 years ago

I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts;

  • There are lots of punctuation and structure mistakes in your paragraph as well as grammar mistakes. I suggest you to double check your post on spelling, grammar, structure, and punctuation. Having these mistakes makes your post hard to read and understand. A tutorial must be formal and easily understood.

  • What you really have shown is doing it by yourself, not teaching. You can avoid this by approaching more theoretical/technical to the subject. If you need examples, there are sites which offer professional tutorials. I won't include them because I don't want to advertise them, but checking them might change your approach to the tutorials and increase the value of your post.

  • You might consider changing topics to preserve some uniqueness. Your post is OK, but similar can be easily found on the internet. Being unique with tutorials on Utopian is not required, but preferable as we value rare posts more than other.

  • The volume of your tutorial is too sparse. To increase it, please reduce the amount of the filler content (like too long code blocks) and add several (up to 4-5) substantial concepts.


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Thank you for your review, @yokunjon!

So far this week you've reviewed 1 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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