I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts. Note that, my thoughts are my personal ideas on your post and they are not directly related to the review and scoring unlike the answers I gave in the questionnaire;

• Structure

  • I advise you to not include the introduction of the curriculum for each part of the tutorial. It makes the tutorial unnecessary complex, which reduces its efficiency.

• Language

  • Some of your sentences are artificial. This makes them hard to read and understand. To overcome that, I advise you to check the structure of your sentences.

  • There are some sentences which are hard to understand because of the vocabulary and grammar.

  It's not possible to give exact examples on this, but I think the main reason behind is translating it from another language (in this case, Spanish). Proofreading it might solve this.

• Content

  • Some of your code isn't English, which might cause confusions. I advise you considering the usage of English resources in your tutorial to avoid confusions.

  • I advise you to follow a naming convention. Some of your function names and variable names are inconsistent and hard to understand. For example, instead of using "useridxprueba", you can use "user_id_x_preuba".

  • What you really have shown is doing it by yourself, not teaching. I advise you to change this approach to increase teaching efficiency. You can avoid this by explaining what you are doing and why you are doing, instead of "copy & paste this".

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