I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts;

• As there is little timespan between my recent review, my review is same.

• As I stated in my review before my last review on your tutorials, there were lots of structure and grammar mistakes in your speech. I suggest you structuring your speech before recording it and practicing it until it is reliable. Having these mistakes makes your speech hard to understand. A (video) tutorial must be formal and easily understood. Still, it's no shame and I can easily see that you improved yourself.

• In my review before my last review on your tutorials, I stated that writing examples while recording is a bad habit. I'm grateful that you prepare your examples beforehand. But now, the same thing happens with the charts. There are online chart programs like draw.io, I suggest using one of these and preparing the structure for the charts before recording. Then, you can easily paint over them to show what you mean without losing time and causing confusions. Here is an example I made for your first chart in your latest reviewed contribution:
  

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