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RE: Introducing Teleposter As My Best Telegraph Android Client

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hi rufans,

I appreciate the effort put in reviewing the Teleposter mobile app. The app seems great and very useful. Also, I appreciate your consistency in reviewing different useful apps. However, you need to improve in some areas.

I like how you start by sharing information about the genesis and the reasons behind the birth of the Teleposter. But, I think most of the information within the post could be sourced from the internet. What I am saying is, you could add a more personal touch by sharing more of your personal experiences using the application.

Furthermore, I appreciate the quality of the visuals included in the post. It looks catchy and nice. On the other hand, the post had a lot of issues. It appears you used Hemingway to edit your texts. Well, it is good, but you need to understand that Hemingway is just a tool, not the ultimate solution. It can be manipulated by short or incomplete sentences. While you use tools like Hemingway, it is important you devote the time to check your texts properly.

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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