Hi, and thank you for your contribution. The Screenstream is indeed a nice and easy to use app. I appreciate the explanation about the importance of the project. Also, you made the blog post personal, and you shared your experiences.

That said, there are areas you could improve. The post could be more polished to enhance readability. I'll share some examples.

a pin code to fully access the live stream.

Here, the modifier fully should be at the end of the sentence. Therefore, it should be- a pin code to access the live stream fully.

The Google Services Plugin cannot function without it which he later figured by himself, the problem

You joined two independent clauses with a comma. A semicolon would be a better option. Alternatively, a comma (, and) or (a period)

I hope to see some improvement in your future publications.

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