RE: You like something(content) on Youtube, you can download it with; NewPipe.
Thank you for your contribution. Newpipe is a fantastic project. I have been using it for over two years, and it has been wonderful.
I appreciate all the information. However, there is a disparity between the quality of the content and that of the presentation. The post details the uses, features, and your experiences with it. However, the issue I often have with your posts is the use of superfluous words. If you want your readers to enjoy reading your post, try to write concisely.
Further, the presentation, I appreciate the short sentences, but some are fragments. I understand that you set the readability on Hemingway, but Hemingway is just a tool and could confuse writers sometimes.
Overall, this is a decent effort, and I appreciate it.
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Thanks for your review @tykee. Please I'd appreciate if you cited examples of the errors in my post. Thanks.
There are many issues in the post, but I will cite a few.
I ‘’decided to begin’’ is extraneous. You could say: ‘’I began a series about some Youtube downloaders I’ve used.’’
A little bit is redundant. A little or a bit, choose one.
Readability could be improved with: ‘’So I assume it to be performing two functions.’’
Another tautology. Reason and why.
Here, the second sentence is a fragment with excessive words. That could read as: I said NewPipe’s UI is great, especially because it had dark themes.
Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!