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RE: Blokada: Securing your privacy online

in #utopian-io5 years ago

This is a decent and extensive walk-through of the Blockada's features. However, the post does not have as much editorial content as I would like to see. Aside from the little thoughts on the introduction part, and that the app blocked 60 domains on your device, there isn't anything much to learn here. I suggest you make your next publication more editorial.

On the presentation, you did great. The post is well-structured and well formatted. However, the writing could have a rework. There are grammars and punctuation errors. Also, readability could be improved by rephrasing some sentences. I will cite an example.

You also have the ability to enable or disable notifications.

You ''have the ability to'' is extraneous. That could read as: You can also enable or disable notifications.

Overall, I appreciate the effort, and I hope to receive more contributions from you!

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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