Hi @drsensor

Thank you for your video tutorial in response to the Byteduino Task Request. I can see that you have put in great effort to do the tutorial following the guidelines explained in the readme file to walk users through the Byteduino co-signer library.

Here are a few things you can improve on as you do video tutorials:

• As mentioned in my last review, it would be great if you can make the font sizes bigger in the video so that people do not need to squint their eyes to figure out the words and codes.

• The delivery of the presentation needs improvement. You can try writing out an outline with structured steps so that when you teach, you can lead your users to move from one concept to another easily.

• This time noticed that your speech is not so clear as last time. You need to work on speaking in complete sentences and not run on sentences. In that way, your users will know where your thoughts begin and stop.

• You have done a good job in writing out the tutorial. For people who have English as their second language, try to keep your sentences short and simple. When sentences are long, people have to read back and forth to understand what you are trying to say.

• In your images, the fonts are too small and not clear. Try to enlarge them to a good font size.

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