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RE: Unique Android Apps : Episode 1A (Do more with QKSMS) Cont'd
Thank you, I try to improve this proofreading and style. Any advice @lordneroo?
Thank you, I try to improve this proofreading and style. Any advice @lordneroo?
Hello there!
Most of the proofreading issues I spotted in your text are related to the incorrect use of punctuation marks. When used incorrectly, punctuation makes communication confusing. For instance:
No need to use a comma there. There is no subordinate clause, appositive, or other special situation calling for a comma. This would be much better: "The backup and restore function on this app makes it possible for me to keep essential texts.''
Furthermore, as mentioned in my review, there were issues of style. For example:
This sentence should read: ''I occasionally format my device in order to remove junk files and delete files saved in the internal storage of my device.
I hope you find this comment helpful.
Have a great day!
@lordneroo, sorry am replying late. Thank you for the feedback, I will definitely look into it.