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RE: Java Programming with Official Hord | Building Data Analysis Application with Java FX (SPSS Sample) - [EP 1]

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Thank you for your contribution @official-hord.
After reviewing your tutorial we suggest the following points listed below:

  • In the tutorials it is important to write professionally. Be more careful as you write the tutorial.

  • In some parts of your tutorial you use the first person in the text and then use the third person. It is important to maintain consistency in the text.

  • Use shorter paragraphs and give breaks between them. It will make it easier to read your tutorial.

  • Nice work on the explanations of your code, although adding a bit more comments to the code can be helpful as well.

Thank you for your work in developing this tutorial.
Looking forward to your upcoming tutorials.

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