Setting aside the plot of your story, which almost achieves a screamer-class surprise, and the eye-hurting lack of formatting, I strongly disagree on the tag selection you've marked your post with.

utopian-io tag: Your post absolutely does not relate to open-source. Zero. Nada. I've also seen you've used it before in many unrelated posts. Please remove this tag.

BTW. Your post see to be a complete copy of your other post from half a year before. that one. I'm not even sure if that counts as spam or whatnot.. but I doubt that's welcome in the community.