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RE: ScreenStream: broadcasting your device's screen

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Thank you for your contribution to Utopian.

Even though I have never used this tool, I do understand how useful it can prove to be nowadays, and this is the main reason why there are many alternatives out there offering such services. Now, the fact that this project is open source makes it an even better option, and it's very encouraging to see that it's being actively developed.

I appreciate the fact that you took the time to compose a detailed blog post that contains valuable insights into the key features of the project. The post also includes a decent amount of personal content, and you also provided an insightful comparison with PhoneBeamer, making your publication enjoyable to read. However, the post did have minor writing imperfections, and I will point out a few of those:

I clicked on the icon and my the app started broadcasting my apps screen to everyone who has my device's link.

Let me rephrase that: "I clicked on the icon and the app started broadcasting my screen to everyone who had my device's link."

On the settings feature, they're a lot of setups but I'll just look at the unique and amazing ones.

This one should read: "On the settings feature there are a lot of setups, but I'll just look at the unique and amazing ones."

In conclusion, this is another very interesting review from you. Your writing has improved a lot, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work. Keep it up, it will pay off.

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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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