RE: Simple To Do App Let You Stay Productive In Life
Hello, @autofreak!
Thank you for taking the time to promote this tool with an informative blog post. This is indeed a very useful project, especially in times like these when the vast majority of people are caught up in their everyday struggle. We are living such hectic lives trying to make ends meet and handle so many responsibilities, that it's only natural to forget things. And that's why I appreciate the fact that you shared information about this interesting project.
However, I have a few issues with your publication. First and foremost, even though I like all the information provided, I have to say that I wanted to read a bit more about your personal experience with this application. The post certainly contains valuable information about your personal views and thoughts, but I wish you had shared more information about the things you have done with the application. Your content is more about the things that can be done with the tool, and I definitely enjoyed reading your work, but I wanted to know more about your personal experience of using this application in your daily life.
Furthermore, there were issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the redability of your text. Let me know if you would like me to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment.
Nevertheless, you did a really good job of promoting this tool, and I appreciate the time and effort you put into your work. I look forward to your next contribution.
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Thanks a lot for your kind words, I have been using the app for some time. Under homepage, I shared a screenshot of tasks that I have set using the app. Also, for the sake of learning and to avoid future mistakes, I would want you to point out issues with style and proofreading.
Hello!
I apologize for the slow reply. I will cite few examples for you:
This is a bad sentence. Let me rephrase that: " It seems like they had better mental capabilities than us, because those who cannot write often depend on their brains, which yields increased memory retention."
This one should read: "Also, there is a delete button in the top-right corner"
This one should read: "Include a task priority feature. This could be in the form of high, medium and low priority."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!