Dear @mugitubi,

First of all I would like to welcome you, as I see you are new on steem platform!

We do appreciate the Introduction, however we would suggest that you create an #introduceyourself post where you will present your new account to the community.

We strongly advise that you use a tool to assist you with your posts and to improve your English skills. There are many grammar & syntax errors that could be avoided.

You are mentioning some information & statistics in your preface, without providing any source link. Please remember to always include the source of the information provided for credibility purposes and for validation and further reference.

Regarding the ad itself, the text could be improved.
The click through rate is very impressive, taking under consideration the very narrow audience. However the fact that your ad (written in English) was targeted to Turkish speaking people, could be the reason that your reach was so negatively affected.

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