Hi, once again, thank you for the review and suggestions, I try to take them in consideration, but I am having a hard time actually making the posts better, though I am trying to read more other Utopian authors so that I can learn from their style. I am sorry that I can't improve as fast as I wish I could.

Thank you very very much for your patience with me and for your effort on helping me and the other contributors to improve our writing skills!