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RE: HEDE: The Wikipedia of our time. [Part Two]

in #utopian-io6 years ago

The idea of writing about the various themes in Hede is a nice one. It would be useful for new and potential users. The screenshots used were also fine.

That said, this post was very difficult to read. You use convoluted sentences with bad grammar, where simple sentenced would work much better. In my last comment to you, I recommended that you use Hemingway. Did you paste the text there before posting? I just did. Hemingway ranked it as "poor," and the app is usually fairly generous in its ranking. You have to learn how to walk before you learn how to fly. If you want your posts to have an impact, start by writing simple, clear text. Once you've mastered that, you can add embellishments. Though, frankly, those are often redundant in non fiction.

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Thank you for your review, @didic! Keep up the good work!

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