RE: 1UP-Date: Mushroom Monster, No More DLive, Esoteric Community Airdrop & Fundition Update
Another fine update from you. I remain very enthusiastic about your plans and activities. The @dlive announcement was a shocker, and I was impressed with your swift reaction - and your artist's swift adaptation of the new mushroom monster illustration to fit the occasion.
I'm not clear on why you need the face to face meeting to convince @aggroed and @yabapmatt. Is it because the fest comes before the SMTs launch, so you don't feel you need to hurry?
The post had some very minor grammar issues. I would be happy to give examples in a follow-up comment if requested.
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Thank you once more for your fantastic feedback. I love the fact that you are now asking for a special correction first. Saves both ends a lot of time and has a nicer touch to it. In fact, I actually do want to get feedback because since your first big correction I realized there is some work I need to do to improve my English grammar. The last sentence probably has a comma somewhere.
The Dlive thing was synchronicity as I got the new monster design and edited the logo in it myself. ;)
Meeting the Steem Monster founders in person is currently the only way I see to be able to get their attention. They have a lot of work and a big growing community and business. I am not on their radar yet as far as I know and I don't want to annoy them either. We will get our chance for sure and SteemFest might be it.
You know I love giving examples! So, here you go:
"Steem dApps are on the rise and we find communities with specialized platforms all over the ecosystem" would be better as "we are finding," as it is an ongoing process.
"offer users to support their favorite projects" should be "allow users to support" or "offer users a way to support."
"For more infos please check out our @Fundition fundraiser below for a detailed overview." Either the start or the end of the sentence is redundant, as both say the same thing. I would prefer to keep the end, because... well... "infos" is not a word. I know people use it, but I am an old man who prefers real words. Like "information." That's a pretty great word.
Thank you for the feedback. The ongoing process I knew but did not pay enough attention to it. I will keep an eye on it, should be rather easy.
The infos/information thing is a small shocker as I have used that word always in slang, apparently.