It is great to see your use of Actifit, and a report on your earnings is something that can be useful as an incentive to other users.

However, I had some serious issues with the post, both as it relates to the content, and the way it is presented.

First, the content. Apart from your own stats, most of what you present is information that is available from the app's account, and is not unique. You include minimal editorial content. I would want to hear more about your experiences with the app, one month in. The joys, the difficulties. How it feels to use.

My bigger problem is the presentation. We expect posts to be well written, with attention to detail. Some of this post looks like it was dictated and not edited later. Some of it looks like it might have been translated from another language by machine translation. I'm gonna cite a couple of examples:

• "The project I one and a have month old." This looks like an unedited dictation of "The project is one and a half month old."
• "That much of delegation in such a small period of time," from the same paragraph, looks like machine translation of what was supposed to be "So much delegation in such a short period of time."

I'm not saying you used speech to text or machine translation. I am saying that's what it looks like. This is the second post in a series. I really hope you take these comments to heart when it comes time for the next post.

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