This is, in many ways, an awesome post. You provide the editorial content we're always looking for by telling your story with the app: your experience, benefits, and insights. I really appreciate that.

And, well, you know what comes next. We've been doing this for a while: I had some issues with style and grammar. Lemme cite some examples.

• "I’m using it for a month and a half and through all august 2018" has a couple of issues. To start with, "I'm using" is in the present tense, which does not work when you go on to talk about a period of a month and a half. It should have been "I've been using." Next, the second part is redundant. We're in the start of September. If you've been using for a month and a half, the second part is obvious. If you do want to have that time stamp, you could add a separate sentence: "August 2018 was my first full month using it."

• "Couple of word about the project." Dalz. Buddy. You know better. "A couple of words."

• "The team is doing a good job for now and they are rolling regular updates on both, the app and the website." Again, a few issues. Since you're talking about a period of time, "The team has been doing a good job" would be better. And you know I love a comma, but there's a time and a place. And that time and place is often - and certainly here - before the word "and." This should have been "The team has been doing a good job, and they've been rolling regular updates on both the app and the website."

These and similar issues aside, I really did appreciate this update.

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