Thank you for this contribution. We're always delighted when a project goes open source. Your post was comprehensive and informative, giving readers all the information they might need. You also provided good graphical illustration.

That said, your post could have benefited from improving a couple of key areas. On the content side, you mention that there are other open source twine games, but don't mention what they are or talk about them in any meaningful way.

On the presentation side, your post had some issues of style and grammar. If you like, I can give some examples in a follow-up comment.

Finally, I played the game, and enjoyed it. Sadly, it did not take enough of my time to procrastinate writing this moderation review.

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