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RE: My Journey with Actifit, September 2018 – App Info, Activities, Tokens, Earnings
Thank you for the review.
Yes, I want you to give me some examples for improving the style and grammar. I'm trying to get better at this, folowing your remarks, and they are welcomed.
Cool. Examples ahoy!
As you're talking about a prolonged period of time, the second part of the sentence should be "and I have gotten used to it."
"I walk to work."
They now have the possibility of using the app.
I skipped ahead to this next one, as this is an issue that appeared a few times in the post:
I know I've been saying "add more commas." However, it's important to add them in the correct places. In this case, the second comma is redundant.
Thank you very much!