#ULOG 4: The Not So Pretty Side of Practice

in #ulog7 years ago

Hey guys! I'm back with another poem in English. I got bored with the AABB and ABAB rhyme scheme, so I decided to tinker with another format instead. It's definitely a little rough at the edges and sounds kind of dragged out when you read it, but I guess this will serve as a good practice session to prepare me for writing more poems in the future.

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(Little girl lost in the woods | by Niki van Velden)

Have You Seen This Girl?
by Jesse Mar E. Mulintapang

Sometimes I feel like a little girl
All alone in my little world
With my precious innocence intact

Ignorance is bliss, oh yes
But because of it I'm helpless
For many evil eyes I will surely attract

I ran away to protect my fantasy
So reality won't get to me
But with every step I had lost track

Now I'm lost and so far away
From my home where it's safe to stay
And now I can't find my way back.

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So you did an AAB AAB scheme? Very clever. You challenge me, I like it, More power!

amazing !! a new kind of rhyme scheme :O very nice idea

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