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RE: The New Arrival (A 24 Hour Short Story with Poem)
I love the picture, it's perfect.
I like the story, it's really cute, so it's hard to say whether it's better with or without.
I love the picture, it's perfect.
I like the story, it's really cute, so it's hard to say whether it's better with or without.
Thank you, I just couldnt find anything vaguely right so had to cobble something together, bit wobbly but glad it works :)
As a poem, I am not sure it needs the story, but the more I think about it the more I feel it needs it to fulfil the criteria. Still not sure if I would just use the poem alone or with it if I ever did print the odd vanity book lol
Yeah, the poem can definitely stand on its own.
And there's nothing to say a poem's not a story (back in the day a hell of a lot of the stories were in poetry form) but I can see where a poem might feel odd in a contest dedicated to Harlan Ellison.