The Amazing Robot #060:

in #twentyfourhourshortstory6 years ago (edited)

Juan sat on her dad's computer as she scrolled through designing the perfect man she had envision as a boyfriend. Maybe her imagination of a perfect man does not exist and she decided to make one for herself programmed in the nature of perfection.
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The game of baseball changed for better to the crowd as Rolex joined the game with his awesome brilliancy in Target. His skill, accuracy and speed was faster and a perfect hitter than a human can accommodate. Soon he became renowned in the entire high school. The crowd cheer louder whenever he steps out to perform.

As long as Rolex was in the field ,the game was considered a win for him. Within a while he had won several awards for himself. As much as people loved him over his excellence, he had foes who frowned at his victory.

"Baby, that was a great display" Juan said to Rolex who hugged and kissed her lightly on her forehead.
"Your presence is enough to make me win" he replied.

This was what Juan wanted. The perfect kind of man who can be everything she needed. And this time he was making her an object of envy among her friends who wish they had just the same kind of perfect man.

Gradually , Joe's fame began to die off as Rolex became the talk of the school . Within him he had doubt Rolex was a human, on many occasions he had seen Rolex perform task a human cannot achieve, no matter how the ball was thrown , he never missed a target but his suspicion was baseless.

"What do you think of Rolex" Joe asked his close friend.

"He is just perfect ,I think" Daniel replied.

"That's my point, can a human be this perfect"? Joe asked .

"What are you thinking" Daniel asked

Joe related all his thoughts to Daniel and how he had planned to find this out.daniel decided to help him with his plan

Soon it approached the baseball yearly league competition and as usual everyone had predicted it outcome. " "Captain Rolex" will come the brilliant hitter, they must have said.
The game began and his hit won the people's heart through till the final. People came Even from afar to experience such awesome nature of his.

Few minutes after the ball was thrown as Rolex was running toward the thrown ball suddenly he started to analyze different interpretation, experiencing a wrong reading. His programmed memory started to read everything as "enemy" . Soon he couldn't control his nature , can he, when he was a robot. His actions started to portray violence. The crowd became surprised and at the same time disappointed to realize their baseball star was a robot. The whole congregation started to run away for safety.

Alert, alert , alert. The security flushed in as they held him and soon discovered he was a robot programmed in human intelligence. Further investigation was carried out and Juan was trace to have used the best robot which was capable of becoming a human programmed into the owners desire. Only one robot was able to do that. Robot #060.

Joe felt fulfilled as his plan came true, "my suspicion was right ,he said. Afterward he made Juan became an object of mockery. Juan felt sad when her made robot was taken from her. Can she have a perfect man once again. That became her quest afterward

Here is the contest link

https://steemit.com/twentyfourhourshortstory/@mctiller/writers-win-5-steem-oct-9-twenty-four-hour-short-story-contest-a-robot-is-secretly-playing-in-the-world-series

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