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RE: Mr. Lonely (Original Story) - twentyfourhourshortstory contest run by @mctiller
Thanks @eveningart, I am glad you liked it. I almost wanted him to see the neighbors lives and then venture out to meet them and accidentally let details he shouldn't know slip out in conversation. Decided to go the direction I went instead though.
I really like the direction you decided on- kept that strange sense of claustrophobia intact. I look forward to reading more of your writing! E x