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RE: The Snowman ( A 24 Hour Short Story)
A lovely story @calluna. You have expressed the character well in the story. As a kid, they always determine on what they want to finish. And in the story i felt the bonding between Hess and the snowman. The story well structured, i able to follow the storyline well.
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Thank you! I don't spend that much time with young kids these days so it can be a bit of a challenge to get the characters across ♥️
But you made it @calluna. You have deliver the message well. This was how a kids behave when he determined on something. As well aa the bonding between them were well written 😊
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