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RE: Mr. Lonely (Original Story) - twentyfourhourshortstory contest run by @mctiller
Fabulous story! I loved the subtle implication of making a deal with the devil in the middle, and the confirmation of it at the end. It's funny how blessings turn out sometimes.
Thanks @mattifer, As I said in the above comment - once I saw the prompt the story just sort of started forming in my head. The lonely man needed a way to suddenly start seeing through walls - why not throw in a deal with the devil? lol