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RE: 24 Hour Short Story - Trapped in Stone
Haha, the word "light" or its variation is repeated seven times in a tiny first paragraph, at first I felt trolled, then I felt the light )
Interesting play with words that gives a desire to continue reading the story!
XD I didn't even notice. Making silly mistakes like that are common when you have limited time to review something and rewrite it.