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RE: 24-Hour Story Contest Short Story - The Unicorn of Brightview
Awesome take on this mythical beast- and I like that you've taken the unicorn and given it a bit of a dark and sinister edge with this tale! ... that said, it's not just the unicorn you've painted with a sinister brush - blimey what a scary bunch... Jebediah - proud and greedy - Anthony - spoiled, and greedy - and your narrator... just a little bit seedy!!
Fabulous story - really enjoyed it- and how I hope that he doesn't come back for poor Marissa when she comes of age!
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