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RE: Ten For Ten - Twenty Four Hour Short Story
again, great world building. The whole concept of tripping through time was far out. Good opener, you drew me in to the story and the mystery made me want to finish reading.
Thank you! I think getting feedback is helping me improve the next time around, in some ways having to keep to the word count made me think more about what parts I actually needed to tell. I do feel like I could improve on creating plots, I always really appreciate your feedback so if you ever feel I could work on something let me know :)