The Queen of Cats (Part 1 of 3)

in #twbwritingcontest8 years ago (edited)

This is my entry for The Writer's Block Art Prompt Writing Contest #11.

I'm only submitting Part 1 for the contest. The whole piece was too long for steemit in one post. It's not ideal, but I decided for all the inspiration The Writer's Block have provided, I should submit an entry.

The other 2 parts are written but need to be reworked. Once I decided to break it into 3 parts, I had new ideas. They'll appear in the next few days or whenever work gives me a breather.

I dedicate this to the lovely @supersoju because she really is one of the nicest and quirkiest steemians I've met. Check out her blog, she is one strange cat lady. If you want to see hairy insect legs, salt crystals, bacteria or vacuum matter under a microscope, she is the science blogger for you.

Finally, thanks to @thewritersblock for organizing the contest and @lymmerik for the intriguing photo. If you haven't already discovered this writing group, they're a lively community and well worth the effort.

So without further ado...

PART ONE

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New York City, 1935

There was a cat curled up inside the old chandelier.

Cecilia blinked.

How was that possible?

She faltered on the step of the grand staircase of the abandoned theatre. Her hand caught the dusty brass banister to prevent her from tripping. The indulgent pile of white fur shifted, lifted its head and perked its ears. Bright blue eyes set in a dark face stared down at her unblinking.

Gerard, her fiancé, and the Realtor were a few steps ahead of her. They were discussing the theatre’s infamous past. There was a fire in 1875, followed by the gruesome murder of David Montague, the previous owner who lavishly restored the theatre at the turn of the century. It had stood boarded and abandoned ever since.

When the men passed directly under the fixture, the pretty cat started to growl. It waved its brown paw and leaped from its nest of broken and misaligned crystal.

“Watch out!” cried Cecilia. Her fiancé ducked and the cat hit Mister Hotham, dislodging the man’s toupee. The Realtor wrestled the animal scratching at his receding hairline .

“Get off me you wretched furball!” snarled Mister Hotham, ripping his hair piece from the cat’s mouth. He grabbed the creature by the scruff of its neck and threw the feline against the patchy gold-leafed wallpaper.

Meeeeeeoooow!

Cecilia darted from where she stood and scooped up the cat. “I’m sure it didn’t mean you harm!”

The harassed man brushed his small amount of hair, repositioned his toupee and straightened his waistcoat. He glared at the cat before looking at his pocket watch. “A quarter to eight, we must hurry.”

The private showing had been scheduled for the evening and the foyer had been dimly lit. It was only now that Cecilia noticed the Realtor was dressed in a suit that was at least fifty years old. He could have been mistaken for a patron of the old theatre. As Mister Hotham rushed up the remaining steps and held the ornately carved door opened, she was hit with a cold draft that left her uneasy and on edge.

“Hurry, Ceci! You promised me your opinion on this investment opportunity!” Gerard eyes twinkled with excitement and his golden hair gleamed healthily against the flickering wall sconces. Drawn forward by his glowing enthusiasm, they stepped through the dark entry together. The door slammed shut, closing them in the shadowy cavern of empty theatre.

Cecilia tensed. Her eyes searched the stage where the red velvet curtain remained drawn

“Intriguing!” exclaimed Gerard, pulling away.

“Not long now,” muttered Mister Hotham, looking at his watch again. “It’s always the same.”

Cecilia frowned at the odd comment.

“John, hurry along, the show starts soon!” A woman called to the Realtor from a row of seats near the back. She was dressed in a heavy frock that added extra layers of frumpiness to her already generous figure. The woman reminded her of an opera singer.

Where did she come from?

Cecilia turned to see Gerard heading to the stage. She looked back to find Mister Hotham seated with his lady friend. More people had joined them as if from thin air.

Alone, real fear began to seed inside her. All these people were dressed from a bygone era. She followed the fading beacon of her fiancé’s golden head down the aisle. “Gerard! Come back!”

Every time she looked, more people occupied the velvet seating. A sweet voice called out, “Soju! You found my cat, Soju!”

Meow!

The cat writhed from her arms and jumped onto the lap of the little girl with ebony curls and bright pink cheeks. She was wearing the most striking red slippers. Cecilia stumbled to a stop, and to her relief, she could see Gerard had stopped too. “This is your cat?”

“Yes, she ran away when the fire started,” said the little girl, as she stroked the fur of Soju.

“Fire?” replied Cecilia. A frisson of fear raced down her spine to make her legs weak. She refused to collapse in a useless heap.

The little girl nodded earnestly. “I could hear her meowing. I wanted to follow but Mama fell down, so I went down too. People were running—”

“Elaina! Stop. You’re upsetting your mother,” ordered a deep voice.

Cecilia gripped the back of a seat to steady herself, her arms shook from the effort. She looked up to see the grim mustached man sitting next to a thin lady. Neither had been there a moment ago. The lady was quietly wiping her eyes with a lace handkerchief.

“Leave her be, Alexander,” she sniffled. “It’s my fault we died.”

“Everyone died,” stated Alexander in resignation as he hugged his wife.

“Not Soju,” whispered Elaina. “He hates Soju.”

Cecilia let out a jerky breath. “Who hates Soju?”

“The Magician. Papa says he’s a demon and this is a Hell he created. But only bad people go to Hell. I asked papa why we were in Hell.”

“Elaina! Enough!” scolded the father. The mother wept louder.

The little girl bit her lip, her innocent brown eyes welled with tears. “I’m just little, I once stole Jenny’s blue ribbon. That’s not too naughty was it?”

“Of course not,” replied Cecilia.

“Then why am I dead?” Elaina raised her tiny palm, stretching out dainty fingers. “I’m only five. I never got to grow up.”

Soju mewed gently and licked the childish hand that petted her.

Cecilia couldn’t think of an answer, so she placed a comforting hand on Elaina's fragile shoulder. The child felt warm, real, and not what she imagined the dead to be. She crouched down to the sad little face. “Where is this Magician?”

Elaina’s face paled, her eyes rounding to saucers before she whispered softly, “He’s standing right behind you.”


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Nice cliff hanger. It will be interesting to see where this goes.

Thank you for the visit, jayna. I’m 80% there, just need to get it consistent before I post. :)

I hear you! We are all a work in progress. I posted my story, and then immediately saw a typo I had missed. Thank goodness Steemit posts are editable. (And thank goodness for the TWB editors, who help me see things I miss!)

I saw it Jayna! It’s on my Steemit reading list along with @anikekirsten ‘s piece. :)

Those obvious in your face typos you blatantly miss are shockers. XD

Yay, thanks @linnyplant. I plan to read them all this weekend.

That opening line was one awesome hook!

Nice buildup as well, and seriously at that closure I think I would be turning with violence, probably a good thing not everyone is like me XD

This didn't seem that long but I guess not the worst idea to break it up for the people with no attention span XD Damn that means having to wait for the next part now :)

goatsig

An upGoat! Yay!! Always a happy sighting. ❤️ 🌈

Loved your commentary too. When I got the ryi thumbs up, I knew I did something right. It really was too long as one post, it was approx 2700 words. I edited and edited down and it began to feel anemic. I ended up adding the word count back in different ways, it just demanded a certain length. I was reluctant to water it down, but I didn’t want to risk it being overlooked like Serena, so this piece was cut at the only logical place. :)

In the end it gave me more scope. As for turning violently, I’m glad to hear—and already knew—you’re not the cowering type. ;)

LoL! Sorry I tend to miss a lot of stuff, as I've probably mentioned I do everything manually :S

goatsig

Ryi, I don’t mean YOU overlooking my stuff! I know you’ll get to me when you get to me, if you get to me! I know your interest is visual art as a first priority and there’s a lot to wade through in our own list of posts.

I’m talking about people who might balk at or not have time for a longer piece. :)

But your upGoats walking onto my page always brings smiles and a spark of happy.

Very interesting piece. Have you ever seen 'The Cat Returns' by Miyazaki? This has that kind of feel about it. A sort of cat-driven surreal adventure. If you haven't, check it out, you may like it :)

Thank you for the visit and taking a moment to comment, foxfiction. :)

Nope, haven’t heard of the work you mentioned, but I’ll check it out. This piece was inspired by elements of Peter Straub’s Shadowland. This was a horror fantasy I loved as a teen but had a very different experience as an adult. Straub references fairy tales in this piece, and one of the tales was ‘The King of Cats’. This piece allows me a brief opportunity to write about magicians as inspired by his novel, something I’ve not done before but have wanted to. I do hope you revisit for the next piece. But thank you for the recommendation!

Cool, well if you're going to check out Miyazaki, his most famous film is 'Spitited away'. Perhaps start there :)

I just read the wiki on Spirited Away, I’m intrigued. Hopefully, I can get my hand on a copy. It’s on my list of films to watch. I actually don’t watch many films but when I do I’m not so inspired by a lot of mainstream Hollywood stuff. No one has recommended me a Japanese Animation before, and one with great acclaim at that! Thanks again, much appreciated. :)

OMG you haven't seen Spirited Away!! lol My partner and I like that movie.

🙀🙀 What is going on?! Cecila didn't even flinch at the fact that they were dead or the people are just appearing out of no where. I'm trying to figure out if the ghosts are appearing or if Cecila is returning back in time because the child felt warm to Cecila. But then it appears Mister Hotham is implying anyone can see them. What is going on!?!?! lol

I like how you added red slippers in the description. Usually red is associated with something emotional that is about to happen.

😹😹😹 @

I dedicate this to the lovely @supersoju because she really is one of the nicest and quirkiest steemians I've met. Check out her blog, she is one strange cat lady. If you want to see hairy insect legs, salt crystals, bacteria or vacuum matter under a microscope, she is the science blogger for you.

Awwww 😘😘 Thank you @linnyplant, that is so sweet of you, even though you called me a strange cat lady too 😂😂

By the way, my latest post is dedicated to you too hahahaha how about that. We ended up dedicating a post for each other on the same night.

Trust me, I’m with you re Cecilia not flinching, I thought and thought on it and just decided this lady has steel in her. She’s horrified but she kept herself upright despite wanting to collapse. You’ll just have to suspend your disbelief. Hehe

This was strangely a hard one for me to glue together, that’s why I’m reworking stuff. My husband was confused too. It’s Soju’s fault!

Oh yeah? I get a dedication from the lady with the microscope? I hope it’s not to look at spider web or bird droppings?!

I will be checking it out first thing Friday evening. I want to be chilled when I read in horror what you have in store for me. Work stressy atm.

LOL We like to blame Soju for things too.
Once I hurt my foot when I stepped onto her toy. I screamed 'Ouch! Soju! Pick up your toys!' hehehe

hahahaha oooo bird droppings, that's a interesting one lol might have to dedicate one of those for you one day for giving me the idea.

No dramas. Just enjoy your evening, de-stress and unwind.

Oh, Soju wants to write you a message, hang on......

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Soju:

Meow! I'm sorry I made it hard for you.
I will try my best to help you write some stuff out.
I will start once I can pick up this pencil. Meow!

Ohmigosh, that’s so hilariously adorable! I was in a rush, but she’ll get her own pic in the one of the parts. Although, the question remains: what’s Soju doing in my story... 🤔

hahahaha I hope that popped a smile on your face, even if it was just for a second. lol all good, Soju doesn't mind, she is just excited her name is in the story and she got to attack Mr Hotham lol. What is Soju doing in your story?

By the way, I just saw a bunch of votes come in for you. Congratulations!!! 🎉🎉Well done! You deserve it!! Keep up the great work!!

Well, you and Soju can certainly take a lot of credit for the inspiration!
(I actually have a seed for another fun project with the pair of you — you 2 are such characters in my head—but it’ll have to wait for a bit.)

Thanks for the pep talk messages, and you’ll find out about more soon enough.... Yes, I read soju’s message a couple of times, lotsa smiles. My husband saw the photo and laughed and he said, ‘Looks like the cat!’ I’m like, ‘because it is the cat!’

You really should get back to writing. Even you ‘transcribing’ her message I can tell you’d be a lot of laughs!

hahahaha now you're making me wonder what sort of characters you have pictured in your mind for Soju and I.

lol @

My husband saw the photo and laughed and he said, ‘Looks like the cat!’ I’m like, ‘because it is the cat!’

That is hilarious.

Don't know if I could get back into writing. Back then I only wrote when I was feeling down. I prefer to read when I'm happy.

Oh gosh, you only write when you’re feeling down? 😢

That’s a shame. I choose to see writing as a life long skill that needs be continually worked on. Naturally, as a child, drawing was my skill. My graphics teacher in high school was very disappointed I was not committed. I took it for granted. 🙁Writing came in my 30s, but I’m a reader at my core. I use creative fiction now to get me to explore concepts and new ideas. And hey, I would not be here otherwise. I’d be googling nerdy IT stuff for my career or DIY projects.

With that said, your blog is a strong form of writing expression. So I should be clear on that so you don’t think I’m diminishing it.

But as with any of the souls I consider good pals, I always get excited when I see different sides to them. I have not seen fanfic writer supersoju, but you’ll wow us when you’re ready. I don’t mind sad stories too, if that’s what you mean as well. It’s just another side of you.

Goodness, this comment chain is looooooong! Blame it on Soju! Lol

Hello cute little kitty, I’m pleased you visited. :)

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