Defiance.

in #twbwritingcontest6 years ago (edited)

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A bead of sweat tickled her hairline as she strained her muscles in anticipation of the pain she knew would come.

"Is that your final answer?"

"Yes," she quietly answered.

Her clothes were torn off her back to better prepare her for the 'treatment'.

She stood there naked, unashamed and defiant in the face of death.

Excruciating pain followed her descent into the 'tube'. The weird liquid ate at her flesh without marring it. She became deaf and blind to all but the pain.

Her lungs craved oxygen but found little. Slowly, she drifted off, taking the secret with her.

This is my entry for the 100 word story contest hosted by @thewritersblock.

This is the first time i would be writing a 100 word story and it is just as challenging as the fifty word story challenge by @jayna. I hope to join the fun more and also hope you enjoyed reading!

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I have question marks
I have thoughts racing through my headI
I hope she comes out better for it on the other side

All the best with the contest @cheekah 😊

Thank you for taking out time to check my blog @kaerpediem

This is a really intense scene, @cheekah. And you are brave to write a story where the main character sacrifices herself!

What could i do? She wanted me to tell her story. Thanks for the compliment @jayna.

Will she ever regain her sight or even her conciousness.

Nice to know you've been engaging in various contests. Wishing you the best of luck in your entries.

Wow! The questions this raises as to what’s being done to her and why are offset by her strength of character, courage, and resolve. You made those hundred words sing. Kudos!

Thanks @ediblecthulhu. You make my heart sing with your comment.

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