Hello trevonjb,

That's a very interesting story about and it is good that you posted your source. However, this is basically a copy and paste of the source material. Doing that is considered plagiarism and can get you in trouble. I understand that English is not your first language. I think we would prefer to see broken English than plagiarized material. Please post things you actually wrote yourself. There is no problem with referencing the material of others and then writing about it provided you use your own words.

Thanks for your cooperation.