Looking forward to read more about this and now I remember that I also should work on my own. Definitely one of motivation to continue my current story :D.
I think that the atmosphere is already well put there. I could already be able to form some sort of situation in my head also since English isn't your native language, you did a good job with the choice of words. Keep it up!
Well, if you do, definitely let me know, would love to read it!
Oh glad to hear that, I think it's so important that a reader can visualize everything inside his or her head, as it makes you feel connected with the story!