would love some feedback on how to make my pics look better.

obviously im doing something wrong, if im only getting 17c :P

https://steemit.com/photography/@dunstuff/sunrise-8-6-2018
please leave comment. be brutally honest. im living on $15 a week, and really need to turn things around, or i face eviction soon.
dont be affraid of offending me.

ty in advance,
the ponder pony