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RE: Tin Foil Raps 2 - A Paranoid Rhymes Contest - Syrian Edition - Comedy Open Mic Round #10
Brilliant entry here my friend @palikari .. so many nuanced and interwoven truths, I'm very much liking your style and equally tipping my hat to you as a writer and genuine contest contender!
This is a fantastic way to get the truth out to people that may normally shy away from it .. used in the right way hip-hop holds an intrinsic power to cut straight to the matter at hand and I learned much from the rap stars of my youth, sadly that is also why much of the art form has been degraded and indoctrinated into a vapid mainstream culture. Thank you for sharing my friend!
Finally, one of my favourite steemians, has arrived from sky
You really took your time, next time please don't be shy
To leave me a deeply felt comment, you move around like a comet
You rays are blazing in glory, thank you for telling your story
Hey man, it's been a weekend of work
so I don't mean to be slack
but in a world of pretenders
you know I've always got your back
thank you for destroying this war of illusion
the worlds on a drip
and needs this lyrical truth transfusion
Cos in an age full of flaws
with no time to pause
we find ourselves slaves to Newtonian laws
for every action there is an equal reaction
and a world without love
enables hate to gain traction
perpetually frozen in cycles of time
until the wise step forward
and in the sand drawn a line
Sensational!