Steemit Poetry Contest #14-Words
Lost in thought when I can’t speak
Strung in lines to make me strong
They lose their way if I don’t weigh
and fail me if I am wrong.
The music, to which my heart beats
Paints a picturesque swan song
My love forever, binds on sheets
Remembering me, when I’m gone
Lovingly Crafted
Rhythmically stirred
What’s the magic?
Words
Thanks to @damianjayclay and @thewritersblock for the editing
Very strong finish. The build up is very well received.
wise words
#diebitchforthewin
you are safe!
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I always start with my endings as well! Great execution, and alluring wordplay. I know who to come to when I need a poem to impress the lady-friend ;)
very nice. Felt smooth or sensual. I could almost see a lady in a gown in front of a old school mic and band as she whispers these words to the crowd. RESPECT
i appreciate the present nature of this one, @diebitch, the metaphiric ways you tie the words that fuel your poetry and voice to yourself, your life, your love and your legacy, pretty cool thoughts and great execution.
As always, great last line - you always have a great feeling for those!
Yes , I always start with that
if only i could be so fortunate - as far as talents go, starting with an impactful ending give you a place to go; no wonder you're wordplay and direction is always so well done.
always fun to read you, @diebitch.
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This one is beautiful and haunting... thinking about what's left after we're gone
but i really like where you said "lose their way if I don't weigh and fail me if I am wrong"
sometimes the thought of that frightens people into silence. and sometimes silence is what's needed! hehehe