I had been waiting for this! You did an excellent job! Seriously!
I am no one qualified to critique, but if you would like just a regular readers thoughts... I felt like the very end was rushed; I loved your expressive writing and visualization so much, I wanted a little more right at the very end.
But, you did a gorgeous job with one of my all-time favorite fairy tales. Looking forward to whatever's next!
Yes you caught me coachjj, my ending suffered from senioritis. I had been working on it for two weeks and was ready to move on. I'll be working on a more well-rounded story next time.
You truly did great! You're very talented and you've got great things in your future!