You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Tides of Change, a Novel by @rodeo670: Part 5View the full contextmojorisin (60)in #thetidesofchange • 7 years ago cool
Thanks. What's cool about it?
Your writing technique. However, I would try to mix up the direct speech with a bit of reported speech; it helps it flow better. Keep up the good work, though.