RE: The story in series: Chapter One
I love this. I also love what @carlgnash is bringing up. Sincerely, I want to know what happens to them next on Mars.
But for the fact that we all have the privilege to determine how this story goes let me narrate my own chapter two.
Zoe couldn't save Marcus, she only cried and wished someone would come along and help. Although she knew that would be impossible. The rain was no longer pouring heavily. She went outside just to find hefty men searching seriously for something, which would be her. George Sorras could no longer wait for her daughter to come back home, so he sent them to go look for her. She pleaded they go back to save her friend. Although they refused. She didn't give up. Marcus was rescued by the men. Marcus still in a coma. It seems he may never wake up from this sleep. Doctor told his father he may never be able to walk again, that's if he ever get the chance to be alive again. His father left without saying a word.
End..
Wow. You are kinda dark, dude. I love it! I am thinking that maybe Marcus develops super powers along the ESP side of things while in the coma and maybe even begins to exert influence on the minds of people in the outside world, while seemingly still comatose. Because of course I bring the weird. Following you mr-aaron, looking forward to something imaginative from you in my feed ;)
Now I love this. Super abilities! I'll like to see him cause more confusion. Play with people's mind.
Following you too, carlgnash. Most of my imaginations may start coming on my blog by mid November
Great proposal @mr-aaron! Thank you! I especially love the ending! "His father left without saying a word..." Nice!
Hope you'll stay with us until the final chapter, giving us beautiful proposal and seeing them perhaps becoming part of the story!
Not moving an Inch! Can't imagine missing an episode of this..