Alright man, so your flow is on point. Timing slipped maybe once or twice. Could've been a bit longer though. All in all I was diggin it, just can't get too much of a feel for it cuz so short. Clicked that upvote!
I just actually finished mine. Feedback for feedback?
Ye originally i dissed these lyrics becuz i didnt like em to much but then i thought id just throw something toghether! Appreciate the feedback brother! One love!