The Cave, Episode 5 - an interactive rhyming adventure. (Sudden Death)
Read the rhyming episode, then choose what the final line should say, by voting for your favourite in the comments below. To catch up on previous episodes, go to #thecave - also, one predetermined option will now be FATAL. Choose wisely.
You hear a rushing stream ahead...
You chose:
...but stop to rest and make your bed.
You lay upon a rock to sleep
And soon you're drifting, drifting deep.
SPLASH! You're woken by a wave.
There's water filling up the cave!
This burbling river you have found
Will trap you, drown you, underground.
You must act fast, for death seems cruel...
...You dive into the rising pool
...You climb a wall - high ground's the rule
I know you're going on votes, but remember mines the higher power vote :) hehehe
I hope your "powers" don't land us in the same situation as they did with the crazy naked guy. :P
good point hehe
It goes on vote count, not vote power - don't worry ;)
...You run away - you aren't a fool
Lets go into the pool!
I have to ask... Do you think of lines for every possible outcome beforehand, or do you do it after the choice has been made?
Also, let me take a moment to compliment you on how creatively you engage your followers.
Interesting question. I think of three possible stories, one for each of the choices. But I don't write it into rhyme form until the choice has been made. So, yes I know what's going to happen for each option you pick. But no, it's not pre-written.
And thanks :)
A large rock smacks your head, all you can do is lay there and drool.
I like it. But what I'm doing with the options, is making each of them a decision that you could potentially make while acting out this story. You couldn't choose to have a large rock smack your head - that's something of an external event. Of course, you could say:
You hit yourself with a rock, lay there and drool ;)
Urgh this is turning into my room 101 nightmare!!!
Sorry :D
No, no you're not.... :)