Your post is good except the third line you missed the high tone and the last line very last word. Here if you want to change "ที่" and "ข้าว" when you missed a little thing make the whole sentence change. I'm Thai and still made a mistake every day. I really admired you for trying and only little mistake. If I were you believe me a lot worst than what you have now.

• white = ขาว
• news = ข่าว
• rice = ข้าว