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RE: The Water World - Tell a Story to Me

in #tellastorytome • 6 years ago

A good science-fiction story! I enjoyed it.
You only need to adjust a little bit the dialogues: in English, there isn't the use of the 3rd person as a sign of respect, nor the 3rd plural insted of the 2nd plural...you should use only "you". ;)
Anyway, good story!

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