Woke up and died? That seems like something thrillimg and from the read of it, I think this is a science fiction if I'm absolutely correct? I love the way you described your body when it seemed you'd died and woken up and was eager to look at the mirror really it was suspenseful, your ability to paint a place that's quite different from the normal setting of a prose fiction is wonderful.
Totally worth reading, this is totally amazing
Thank you, I consider myself still very new to writing, and tried to see the scenes through the eyes of the person. I am really glad you liked it.