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RE: Resurgence - Tell A Story To Me contest entry
There is so much to enjoy in this! A strong opening into a brilliant prelude that sets out your world wonderfully. You break into the main story with the immediately establishment of tension, which you build on as the discover the hatch, and the man inside. The hints of almost precog like abilities are a great touch, allowing characters to sense danger, and a reason to flaunt it just add to that tension. It builds up to the moment of human-computer interface, I didn't know what to expect, but not that. You bring in a touch of mystery, a hint at something, before you tie it up with a fitting end. Thank you, this was a pleasure to read!
Thanks calluna! :D I really enjoyed this premise, both writing about it and reading the other entries. It's always fascinating to me how many different directions people's imaginations branch off in. Thanks for the awesome event and also for the lenient deadline and word count! Stoked for the next one!